Mood:  quizzical

ok then here is a bit of my story

there he was, his black ponytail flowing in the wind, his desert eagle in one hand his knife in the other and around him the enemy, the viatnemise army, Bang Bang.

"thats two down, 10 to go" said the mysterious assassin. He ran towards them, gun's ablazing, and stabbed the nearest one in the head.

"surrendur Mr Christ you're surrounded" said the commander. The assassin dropped his gun and left the knife in the soldiers head. The commander walked up to him and smacked him in the head with the butt of his gun, Knocking him out.

He awoke several hours later in a daze, he looked around and saw he was in a prison and that he was accompanied by another man.

what do you think?